Nice use of metallics, quite rare these days. Definitly think use of inks to darken the colour would enhance it, you could also try highlighting the metallic areas by adding GW's Mithril or Chainmail with a little thinned down ink.
Nice fig never the less from a great game
Woah, thats bright! Be easy for my Khador Destroyer to nail. Bring it on Cygnar... I've been speaking with Avicenna and we think it could use some darkening up with inks. Black and blue on the armour and black and/or brown on the metal parts. Try to keep the edges bright though, also if your inks keep pooling use a tiny bit of washing up liquid in it, it reduces surface tension and it paints on smoother.
P.S. Everyone should play Warmachine!
1 Nice peice.
2 Bad Pic (out of focus and lighting from 1 source.
3 The Name of the model should be in the slot where you have "Another mini".
Constructive Criticism
Good table top Quality Model.