Rating: 10 feck me, if i could sculpt that well i'd be a millionaire i think the sword is perfect, nice and wide and longer and it would look unbalanced.....but seriously dude.....WOW...cant wait to see it painted
Rating: 9 HOLY HELL! (Quite ironic I say that when talking about a Grey Knight) Anyways, that is a excellent conversion. Heck, put it up on eBay. I'll buy it! Anyways, the reason you're not getting a 10 is cause the sword is a litte on the short size.
Rating: 10 hoody hoo wow that is really good i like it and I don't dought that didnt take you a long time i like it alot i agree with banshee the face is very good
i think the sword is perfect, nice and wide 
and longer and it would look unbalanced.....but seriously dude.....WOW...cant wait to see it painted
.. the face is awesome.