This is the Gabriella, Warmaiden #2589 in teh REaper, DArk Haven Legends line. I based her on the Swanmays, a group of female Rangers who had the ability to morph into a swan from the old D&D books.
I tried some NMM techniques with metallic paint on her to try and show off the sword a bit. I am really happy with the way it turned out.
Rating: 6 It looks like you've got the eye for a colour-scheme and it also seems the techniques are in ready to be used...I'd suggest some better brushes and a slight dilution of your paints! Treat yourself to some top brushes, it'll be worth it!
Rating: 6 Good base.
The white parts of the armor look good, but the metal parts look rough and pitted.
Were they drybrushed over black? You can get a smoother look by treating the metalic paint as though it weren't metalic and just blend in other colors (or different metalics) to go from dark to light.
Rating: 6 face is decent, hair needs some finer details, maybe fine drybrushing, sword doesnt look overly metal or nmm, not sure bout that. leg armour paint looks a bit thick or maybe thats the sculpt not sure. base and overall colour scheme seem to be fine. just some fine sharp details need to be added.