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    Hi!

    I\'m a french young painter (15 years old), which painted since 2 or 3 years.

    My latest minis is the \"Voyageuse\" (traveller?) from Helldorado, sculpt by JAG.

    Painted in approximately 10 hours.



    All your comments are welcomme, and sorry for my (very very?) bad english.


    Guillaume.http://www.coolminiornot.com/164010

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    Very nice. Welcome to the forums and your english is just fine.

    I really like the white shirt and the pants. The hair looks nice except I think it could use some darklining where it blows across her face. The sword is nice and I like the armor on her torso, but the armor on the legs seems a bit flat.

    Great job!

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    A great mini to introduce yourself with, welcome to the forums!

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    Welcome to the forums! :)

    Great job! I like your work with the colours, especially the trouser. The breast plate is very nice as well! you definately have something going on here..

    What I feel can be improved is that you might want to give the mini som more definition overall separating the different parts from each other more. I think it\'s most true on the face where it could be separated from the hair more. I think the face could use some more contrast (shading) as well.

    Well done!!

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    wellcome to the forums, and you have done a great work on that mini :D

    I think you are gonna go far in this hobby :)

    // Larre

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    Magnifique! :D Ton NMM est excellent, particulièrement sur l\'épée. J\'aime les couleurs aussi. Je pense que la seule chose à améliorer est la définition, par exemple autour des yeux et entre les doigts. Le NMM est spectaculairement allumé, donc je pense que les autres surfaces ont besion de plus d\'effets d\'éclairage aussi. Très agréable en général, un 9 de moi :)

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    Thanks!

    It\'s true than the mini need some lining, it\'s one of my first problem.

    For the face, I was afraid to dirty by contrasting so much.

    But I will be back with a Allan C.\'s mini, with contrast and lining (I hope ...).


    Guillaume.

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    What Bill said.

    Show off :P

    C\'est bon. :P

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    welcome dude, nice work.
    I especialy like the clothing and sword, the leg armour is lacking a little to get to the same level as the other areas.


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