
Originally Posted by
Willdorling
Hi William,
The base is nice and I like the colours. I think the bone has worked out well but the green is still holding this miniature back IMO.
I think you need to thin your paints down a little more and concentrate on smoothing your transitions. Your colour choices look OK and the depth of your highs and lows gives enough contrast. Where I think you could make some quick gains is to apply some edge highlights, on the carapace for example.
The face is my favourite part and provides a good deal of character to this mini. I also like the metallics you've done on the haft.
Contructively - my least favourite part is the freehand on the shoulder pad. I think the basic shapes are OK but the detail looks smudged so if you can, maybe try to tighten this up a bit. Its mainly the back lining that looks a bit heavy.
Hope this is OK critique sir.
Cheers
Will
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