Demon and his mistress

[kaeyous]

Hello all:
This is the second miniature that I'm doing. There is a story to it, you can read the beginning of the story on the description of the first miniature at www.kaeyous.com

I am happy to be able to share my work with people who appreciate it.

Any comment will be greatly appreciated.

[Phoulmouth]

Her face needs some help, she looks like an old lady until you get to the breasts. Nice work though.

[kaeyous]

Thank you for the criticism!

[funnymouth]

i think the hair may be contributing to the old lady effect. nice tits, though.

[Phoulmouth]

Nah, its not the hair. She looks like she has some huge bags under her eyes and her cheeks are drooping behind the chin if that makes sense. But yes, the tits are fantastic.

[kaeyous]

Fixing the head.... this is so hard!!!!

[kaeyous]

Aaaaah... better. Now, the hair

[funnymouth]

Much better. Nice work.

[kaeyous]

Now we are talking business!

[Phoulmouth]

Aaaaah... better. Now, the hair

That is a lot better. But, just curious, does the top lip look out of proportion with the bottom lip to anyone or am I just being a bit to picky? I think it may be a bit to long but I am not sure.

As to the hair, the only thing I see is that its too smooth, there is no texture, which is something i think you would fix later anyways.

BTW, is this just a pre sculpt or do you plan to 3d print it? Just curious.

[Phoulmouth]

Oh hey, you updated when I was posting. haha. That looks amazing. Cant wait to see more.

[Dragonsreach]

Aaaaah... better. Now, the hair

Do that as a bust and I'd be interested, there's enough challenge in that face to make her 'sinister' or alluring,

[Solun Decius]

The new face is a huge improvement. Not only that it has stronger proportions and a more interesting expression, but also that it's simpler/less noisy.
I don't know at what scale you're planning to print/cast this but I feel there's too much going on over the whole body. There's so much micro-texture all over the skin that will only make it harder to paint, but not really add any detail at a 30-ish mm scale.
It looks great! Like Phoulmouth I'm just wondering about the method of casting it, so you might think more in the terms of the scale intended.

[Milosh]

Oh man oh man. This is freaking out of control awesome. I agree with Mr. dragon that a bust would be a great thing too.


I would want the whole figure too though. That is the beauty with 3D printing though, you can do anything with it, different scales and different parts. You are really on to something here sir.

[Solun Decius]

One thing you might want to consider.
In the first image you posted the girl is uncomfortable. She's dancing and keeping a straight face but she's looking for an exit, or looking up to somewhere she'd rather be.
In the last image she's totally in control. She's the master and the demon is just a protective servant.

The first one I'd buy and paint if you made the breasts smaller and fixed the butt a bit (you can only see it from the side but it seems a bit too big and low hanging). There's something special about it.
The second one looks good with the big breasts and the seductive face, but it doesn't really make me that interested. I've seen it all before in every other fantasy setting.

Your 3D modelling skills are excellent and this is all great work. You might have to consider what feel you're looking for and make sure you model the demon to compliment the girl (or leave the demon out entirely).

[Milosh]

Another thing you will want to do is make the eyes smooth rather than sculpting the iris and pupil into it.

[kaeyous]

Solun Decius: The monster is not a protective servant. The monster is the master and the girl is the proud servant of the biggest warlord in this side of the dry sea.

[kaeyous]

The figure will be 32mm (warlord will be taller). I will also make it in 54mm resin. busts? If enough people want it... then why not? I'm just happy to share my work.

[Milosh]

Really cool.

[mud duck]

Solun Decius: The monster is not a protective servant. The monster is the master and the girl is the proud servant of the biggest warlord in this side of the dry sea.

Then your Title is all wrong! Cause there's no way that she is a he!
Most excellent work. What program are you modeling in?