Hey Luna, I saw that you'd posted this pic in another thread but don't remember voting, I'll pay a visit.
My main thought last view was that the metal effects are very nicely painted but I think your Eclipse logo with its lighting effect is a big distraction. I want your painting to be the central focus, not a logo

I also prefer the darker background bottom right to the stark white upper left, it lets the top highlight on the base stand out more.
Off to vote... Cheers, B.