The NNM will look nice with a little work. But there are a couple things I want to point out to you first, because they take away from the NNM work. First off, his cloak needs shading! It is a large part of this peice, and it looks very bland without some work. Next, he has a belt, show it! It looks like you didn't want to paint that part, or any of the things coming off of his belt. You have very good brush comtrol to pull off NNM that well you're first time out, and I can't wait to see more of your work.