you're technically proficient, but there's a couple things that need work.
his hand is gripping something smaller than that weapon, which seems to be a flail but I can't quite tell. Also, the weapon looks bent and broken, which doesn't look very good. After inking your metals, go over with a light drybrushing or just some edging, as your gold looks bronze or copper, whuch doesn't have the same effect as a shinig deep gold. Furthermore, go and buy some dullcote and spray this bad boy down, and go over metallics and glossy bits with gloss varnish and a paintbrush. do all of that and you'll get a 7 or 8 from me.
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