I like the "lots of colors" it works for her in a very gypsy sort of way. But I agree the sword needs some work. A thin ink wash would help a bunch along with some white highlights. 8 for the freehand and eyes.
yeah i agree i don't know what happen to the sword ..... but the too many colors .. its taken from an actual pattern from the 70s i was trying for the whole mrs. weasly look so it's supposed to be tacky like that ^..^
The freehand isn't bad (better than I could do!) and her face looks good, but she's got too many different colors going on and the sword is rather disappointing.