sean: it's not a =I= but the terminator honour (dunno how to translate)
Your mini is scanned right? this can't help your rating, i think you tried thinning your paints, but it lacks highlights / shadows to give it more depth. Hope i'm not saw as a jerk, trying to help ;)
I like the richness od the blue and the bone parts (although they look like they could use a brown wash). The biggest thing that glared at me was that you hadn't drilled out the barrels of the storm bolter. That, and all your base are needs some work!!