I think you'll get lower marks from people that only know the Deathwiong as being Bone White. In the fluff it clearly states that they were originally Black ( same as the Ravenwing are now ). I like the painting and the "pre-40k" colour scheme. Well done.
The freehand is very nice. You've integrated the theme well.
The black could do with smoother blend and a higher final highlight, but it's a very nice piece.
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