oh your sword looks great. the blood is to much for my taste. the skin could need some extra highlightning. other things already said before by OrkBoy. overall a good job and shows your potential. just keep on exercising and asking others how to to things.
go go go:)
Looks great I think your score is a tad low at the mo.Small things to improve on:
The metals are really good especially on the sword. If you wanted to you could go over the blood on the sword with gloss varnish to make it more realistic. I think the teeth are too white and I can see small dark patch where the paint hasn't covered it all. I really like your tone of green - not too minty, so thums up! The wood I think would look better as brown and would contrast more with the silver caps on it. Also I think you should paint the finger nails ;)
I know I've said a lot but you have great potential so I thought I'd give a few pointers.
Great job!