First time I've uploaded an image here. Votes are nice, but your comments would be invaluable. Praise will keep me going, criticism will help me improve.
The high-contrast white on black really shows small errors. A black ink for the crevases might help cver them up a little, but really practice and better brush control are the solutions there.
the skin doesnt appear to be blended too well; it also appears to ahve a little paint rubbed off on the right hand.
It might just be the angle, but hte left eye does not appear to be focuses on the same point as the right one. the right eye appears natural which is why i point ou the left.