Looks pretty good (and the base is pretty cool) but I'm not sure about the depth of coliur you're getting. Are you drybrushing for highlights? That might explain the bitty feel, especially on the skin. I'm not sure about the nmm on the punch blade either, it just looks a bit grey. With a bit more shading and contrast, though, this would be really nice.
I want one! :)
I think the stretched face could have some more color variation--darker shadows and such. I think a closer pic would help us view it better in general.