Your Nmm effects are very smooth and you have a nice deep shading to the model. The clean lok is nice, but some weathering never hurt a chaos model. :)
Mmh? Your painting skill looks really good - well done on some parts like the black/grey armour and the cloak. On some parts it feels like you hadn't time for that skillz - like the DA helmet... Overall a good mini - i think a little too much colours overall, but good work in the end. keep it up!
very well painted but is perhaps a little too neat. It looks like one of those pre-painted models you get from a toy shop. A little bit of weathering and some battle damage would fix this. Good job nonetheless.