I, on the other hand find those freehands a little out of place. I know that they were mighty difficult to paint as I'm currently working on an identical mini. I find the ancient writings to be very attractive, however the "MENOTH" part seems a little too much. Overall I like that this warjack is dirty as I really don't understand how can these smoking oily tin cans be shiny and clean. I also think you could have placed this warjack in a straight position as it gives an impression of falling down :) All this considered, still a mighty good job. Well done.
Those Freehands rock. Really simple but very effective. You could try to bring out the eye a little bit more but overall a really nice apintjob (8.5 from me). Keep up the good work!