I'm confused.. it's not really clear whats flesh, whats a weapon, or what the whole thing's really supposed to be. It looks like there's some effort put in to this, and the weapon and robes tells me you've got potential. Use bright, vibrant colors on areas like the face/weapons or places you really want to stand out, because the eye is lazy and attracted to color. Might help your overall paint jobs a bit and help your score. Cheers!