I don't see the point of this pic at all. If you ever took the time to look through the rest of this site, you'd notice that it isn't exactly customary to pose alongside your work.
Yeah, i've just reread my comment and it did seem a bit harsh, sorry about that. But at least no harm was done, but just to help you a bit:
-Use washes to add shadows
-Read the articles on taking good photos, that will help your scores go up a bit.
-I can't stress this enough but please don't put yourself in the pics.
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