I cant really see any highlights, some of the good is bleeding into the other area of the models. Slow down could have fixed this. Also hitting it with a matte varnish would have really toned down the glare. Im guessing you used tin bitz on the armor as its the pot behind the mini. Going 1 shade up in the out side of all 90 degree angles and tighter would have been a quick way to bring out sharp corners. Maybe slow down a bit, add some highlights?