You made a very dynamic pose of this oldschool model. Congrats!
I like color choice, very unusual, even as for Bretonnian :)
But the mini is lacking from blacklining. And more shadows please! Don`t be afraid, make more contrast and you will quickly feel the difference.
Cheers!
I love the base and the choice of colours The freehand is also impressive. It looks kind of flat, though. Providing more contrast in the shading would help a great deal, as would a smoother transition for that shading.