Well, since you love to HEAR feedback, HERE is some for you: I'd rate this as tabletop quality. You've done a good job marking out the basic "territories" on the figure, but the face needs work. Your method would be great if the figure was in an environment that was theoretically dimly lit (from behind); then one would expect lots of shadow in the face. However, there's clearly a side-light, so the effect doesn't come off as well. Particularly good effort on the quill pin; it really looks feathery. The tablet is pretty good as well. For your next figure try: cleaning up the face, providing better lighting for your photograph, more variation in skin tones. A lighter, more delicate touch is what is needed here.