well done, fellow dark angels fan. for your first mini you show balls and tallent for going free-hand. the execution is still a bit miss or hit, but you have all the right ideas. most people I know don't even bother painting the interior of rhinos.
this your first? first? thats stunning . well done. i like the freehand sword and the weathering especially. if you wan to improve painting then head straight to the forums. sure hepled me going there :)