Thanks. I know what you mean with the mould-line. Its one of the ones you only spot after you've painted it and taken photos. As for the writing, I guess I'll just need to keep practising. :) I think I did a better job with the writing on my dreadnought, so it shows a few months can make a difference!
I really like these. You don't see many Blood Ravens these days and i think you did a great job on these. I have some minor complaints though, and it's about the lettering on the shoulder pads. I know micropainting is hard as hell, but I think you could have made the black lines a little thinner. And also, I can still see a moldline on the sergeants (?) Thunder Hammer. Still, I like this squad. It's quite inspiring :)