There's no effort made to contrast skin and clothes - it's painted in shades of brown! It's a nice model, competently painted, but without any thought given to composition. Any what's wrong with the base? Red leather, gloss varnish, blonde hair, patterned jacket. You know you can do it right!
Kinda drab. What this girl needs is a red bikini and boots, maybe some stockings and a nice, bright bleach job! Tatoos might add soem attitude as well. Keep it up!