Overall this is a beter than tabletop mini but does lack a certain "Bite". The face could use more work to bring it up to a more "Competition" level and the highlights /shadows aren't particularly strong in contrast. Contrast levels for miniatures of 28mm scale need to be exagerated due to the difference in size to a real person. You would recieve greater advice and constructive crticism by posting submissions into the "Disciuss Submission" area of the forums, join us there we only "nibble ", not bite. :D