Really love those colours you used it is a pity that your paint seems much to thick. Try to thin your paint more and working more with very diluted paint for softer transitions.
Thanks very much! For this one in particular I was really studying the 'Painting Workshop' article in the Cry Havoc magazine Vol 10. They have a great step by step in there I found helpful. I was using different colors but trying to use same methods. They are really great painters!