Geeshe harsh words. First off it is noted in the description that he/she didn't have a diorama plate yet. I would say it was posted here to see what people thought before everything was assembled. Also this does tell a story. Cleary it was a fight for supremacy and the blue faced ork lost (the battle and his head) the other figs were there watching the battle, or about to jump in. The figs look like they are painted well, and the scene looks like it will work when all put together. I'd give this a 6 due to not being able to see due to the size of the photo, but I am bumping this to 8 to compensate for some of the terrible scores that were given.
Er- assuming this wasn't a joke here's a few tips- #1 lose the coffee mug at least. Same goes for the glue(?) bottle. I mean you want people to focus on the models not the crap on your desk. #2 tell a story- what's going on should be 100% apparent for the viewer. Unless you were going for 'chaotic brawl' I don't get this. I mean if you are serious then put a little effort in and you'll get better results