Ah! Better! The choice of colours is great. The extensive use of drybrushing is fine on the clothing, where it conveys texture, but shouldn't continue on the face, where a distinction needs to be made. Smooth blending on the face would make it stand out and give it more life. Also, the metals could do with more attention to their shading and highlighting. Even in larger scale models, you can't always rely on natural light to do all of your work for you!