better then my first figure. You probably had the same mentality as I did when I first started. "Lets finish this thing!" when it should be "Lets start on his head for now" then "Lets start on his robe" then "Lets start on his jewelry"
You have to take it slow and tackle one thing at a time. his robe looks good, the cape looks like a failed attempt of what you did with the robe, dark colors are harder to fade and highlight.
You at least have knowledge of what to do for your first mini, now it'll just take practice.