Hard to tell but I think the non ethereal parts (vampires mainly) could do with better contrast. The eyes seem to have too harsh/large a black lining too. I would like to have seen a contrasting base, something like charadon granite fading to a green directly underneath as OSL from the ghostly parts. Some OSL on the various green flames may have set off and tied in the red that is on the model. The green flames themselves are excellent. The metal work is hard to evaluate but appears pretty darn good as well. I personally would have chosen a different colour than yellow, it is a little evocative of a circus tent as is but then, my fashion tastes run from black to black so take that as you will ;). Overall nice work.