Oh I totally think they rate a 9. You managed to keep and bring out all the details in each model and still keep the paint job bright without being clownish. For something on that ridiculously small of a scale, pulling it off as well as you,did is nothing to be ashamed of. Everything just "pops" so well... The bulkheads, the pale blues, yellows, and greys...all just really bring it home. Like is said before, I wouldn't change the white or anything else except maybe use a paler red. I really hope to see more FSA from you so I can steal some ideas myself (hoping to finally start painting my Terran fleet after Xmas)! ;)
That is some REAL sharp work! If anything, I might've gone with a paler red... the rich red, to *my* eye, (YMMV) kind of messes with the sense of scale.
Still, I LOVE your work on these. Nice, crisp, clean.