Wow- this is a pretty good job considering the mini itself isn't sporting to much in the way of detail- I especially like the face as it is nice and 'tight'. I'm not overly familiar with Fenryll so I can't say weather it is the sculpt or the paint but if I had to suggest an improvement I would say thin your paints- if its the sculpt I'd suggest some gently sanding or filing- all in all well done
This is very good overall. The only problem I see is that the pistol does not look quite right. Maybe darken it up with some details. I would make it have a wood colored grip and a dark steel barrel with a black trigger guard. There are a lot of other ways you could do this.