Decent work. What you should try and it's really just opinionated advice on here but sometimes it can help expidite progress, but try thinning your paints much more an apply in many layers . If it's for play still dilute your paints but maybe instead of many (15-20) layers for effect (5-6) can get close to the same save some time and still prude a smooth layer of paint that's not thick looking. Try using for each drop of paint use 1 drop of flow improver (reaper, p3 eat care good ones.) and also 1 drop of drying retardent from same companies I listed above so it's a 1:1:1 ratio of paint to improver to retardent. Also check on the web for an article on reapers tutorial"the art of the craft" called let it flow it will give you more insight on your fluidity to get Those non streaky smooth finished results you see by the top painters on this site. Also if your looking to improve(and you already have good brush control) check out the forums and start a work in progress . Here artists will give you tips and insight while you work on your mini in stages. Have fun and keep practicing bud.