This is nicely done first off! What I could say for some minor e critiquing if you'll accept , but I'm certain this minor adjustment would help both your appearance and overall score. Your edge highlights need to be much thinner is some parts(chest for e.g.) fan the point of the brush out by drag and flattening it while overturning it , just the tip will start to form a flattened edge this is what you'll use for an edge highlight . Then use increasing highlights up to white but each time cover less and less area then after that you can use small dots of pure white as light reflection points. As a final step when working with black use a blue watered down very diluted ( if you have GWs glaze medium(Lahmian medium) and glaze the sum toatal of all black areas with the blue gaze!use This and repost see what it looks like you'll be surprised. Any ?s let me know if I can help I will bud!
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