The painting is a bit rough, but the overall look is great. Kudos for using complex techniques like OSL and NMM.
A plus also for the face and the eye.
As AGN said, bette pictures might get you a better rating?
I think there's some good work here I'm surprised at the current rating. Perhaps the photos could be better, there's not much depth of focus so there is a lot of blurring. Good skin tone and I really like the base.