your ink is too think.......for something like this (the clothing much lighter than the actual cloth) thin your ink alot more. like 1 ink to 3 -5 drops of water and give it a go after painting first with the kakki, that way its darker kakki instead of that redish brown (chesnut). good job though.....however, i think maybe you should of put more color into like the band on his wrist or the pack on his hip (try some bestial brown leather). i mean the dude will be all kinds of brown, but thats ok, especially if you colored his eye piece or that eagle on his chest bright red, or yellow (like gold) or something......that way the browns blend better together and the model looks more interesting......hope i helped
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