Hi Maenas,
Thank you for your comment. It was effectively for gaming, but I reconize that I painted to fast on this one...
Photos are poor quality, I've to work on that part too.
If you take a look at my latest zombizide (spencer and Cat) I think I made some progress. I'll publish Seth in few days.
Looks like a fast job for gaming purposes... maybe that's the reason behind all those low votes. Anyway I find you really nailed the jean's colour on both miniatures. If you are really looking for a higher punctuation I think that refining the highlights and smoothing those colour transitions a bit could be a good idea. Also you could work a bit more on the hair of both miniatures since it looks like yellow with a brown wash on.
Paint consistency looks like it is almost correct, maybe it's a bit thicker on the base, but that could be just an effect of the picture.
I am telling you these lines with all my respect and with the only aim to help you get better results on your next ones, good luck and keep posting! ;)