I took a look at the auction, The Side and rear picture do a much better job showing what you did on this figure. The photo here (the head on shot) is probably the worst angle to photograph this miniature at. Maybe if your head on shot were about 10 degrees counter clockwise it would give you a better shot. Aside from my commentary about the photograph angle I think this looks really good. If you were to incorporate that other picture that you took in to this I think that it would greatly help you score.