I really like the rich colors you have gotten with the brown of the undergarment and the green of the robe. The pic is too small to see details. The fiery creation looks good. But overall I think it needs...something. It is a little too bland. Maybe a small design along the hemline of the robe?
Nice! The green/gold robe is absolutely wonderful! Very striking combination of colors. Although the pic's a little blurry it seems like you need to work on the face. It looks very flat and some washing/shadowing/highlighting should remedy this...