do you mean the first you have painted or posted here.If its the first you have painted then you are to be watched.Try brighter highlights on the armour.The sword is nicely blended but I dont know what effect your looking for.As say a blue magic blade it looks good,as metallic it doesnt look real.If its metallic you want then go the way of the armour.If youve tried nmm then the lighting is off.You get the benefit of doubt though.Nice mini.