Here and there the colour is a bit too thick and causes an unwanted structure, furthermore you should use some Gloss Vanish to avoid this strong shining effect. And the photo isn't too good, try to make a better one.
Well.. he seems to be drybrushed alot.. which isn't all good for flesh. Rather do layers. And thin your paints in the future.. even if i does take a few coats to paint a mini with thinned paints it is worth it.. produces a smooth finish :)
But this guy looks alright, out for a walk in the woods and to eat some sheep, perfect for any army :)