This is a better and clearer Photograph. While you've got he basics under control such as neatness and drybrushing I think that you need to look to thin your paints a little more. The drybrushing on the cloak does look a litle heavy and is losing out the variation in the coloures. The armour isn't quite right in that the highlights aren't consistant, but that takes practise to get right. have a look in the articles under NMM and then you can use the ideas for the real metallics. All in all not a bad work in progress and I look forward to seeing the completed item. :)