This one is hard for me to comment on...I'm currently focused on painting up a squad of Battle sisters and have had my challenges with them so I speak from experience. First off, let me compliment you on your attention to detail here. nothing has been missed. Secondly I should say that the freehand on the trim of the cloak, (the thorn motif) is well thought out. The paintwork is rough IMO which detracts from the overall appearance. It's a little busy with all of the colors and fiddly bits with the freehand designs and the compression of the image after the enlargement. I had the same problem with making my SoB's too busy, I've since completely stripped them and have started to repaint them in a more unified, simple color scheme. Props to you for thinking outside the "Fluff" of black white and red. The eyes are great, as are the lips. My advice, kick it up a notch and go for NMM, I think you more than capable of producing some good results with that technique. Hard mini's to paint, great job.