The model looks good but really needs highlights like the ones on the robe/tabard. I would probably have given you a better score if the picture didn't include the graphics. I think all the stuff detracts from the image and you'd do better with a clean picture.
Not bad but the paint seems a little thick and a bit messy in some areas. I like the grey and black hair thoe, try and use Matt or Purity seal varnish, gloss is stronger but dosn't always look good on some figures.