MARGARA FIRETONGUE, DWARF

First Posting on this web site. Would love some constructive criticism. THANKS

Posted: 7 Jul 2004

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FUXOR
Dude you need a better camra other than that nice mini
3 Jul 2005 • Vote: 6
Syr Hobbs
Thank you Ritual you feedback is much appreciated. I agree with you on the photography part. I had a friend take the photos for me. I also didn't think about posting cutting and pasting various images, like the back and side until afterwards. I figure if I can get a better camera of my own, which has been ordered, I may be able to re-post a new collection of pictures of her. I think the highlights on upper edges is a valid point specially on her neckline of the dress/apron. Hair wise I feel there is good depth but it doesn't come out in the picture. I could be wrong though. I do have other pictures of her taken at the same time at different angles if interested. Thank you for the critic is has only been a year. Cheers and thanks again
16 Jun 2005
Ritual
The picture is a bit blurry, so the first advice is to improve your photography. Also, include photos from different angles so one can see more of the mini. The painting seems quite well done. The hair looks a bit bland, though. I suggest deepening the shadows and possibly make some brighter highlights on the uppermost parts of the hair locks. Also, some extra highlights on upper edges of things, like the neckline of the dress, the belt, armour details etc, would make the mini more striking.
14 Jun 2005 • Vote: 7
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