good paintjob, but 2 things. one, the red looks pinkish and that's holding you back. two, the pose (standing as he seems to be) looks awkward with the jetpack. third and last, the arms are enormous and make it look goofy. Can you touch below your knees without bending down? I should hope not. Even if they were well-sized, the weighty look they carry and the bulkiness of the greaves tend to make it look awkward at best.
i did this same conversion for my dark angels chaplain, its good to see another one! i have two critiques, first why didnt you straighten out the lightning claws? he's got the spock thing going on. i generally just press a knife inbetween the blades to space them evenly. secondly the base could have been done a lot better! im surprised you painted it so superbly and left out such small details. in any case excellent job!
La conversión está genial y es muy original. El nivel de pintura es bastante bueno. Pero la base te la podías haber currado un poco. :-) Pásate a ver mis figuras y me dices si te gustan. Nos vemos el el próximo Golden Demon