I see a lot of potential here, you have a good sense of tones and colors which is half the battle! Definately work to thin your paints and apply highlights in thinner layers and used more but shorter brush strokes. Your metallics could also benifit from a dark colored wash, to give a bit of depth there. Keep it up, nice work!
Hi, thanks for commenting! (finally :) ) i am learning all the time, and i think i am starting to figure out my consistancies. I like this model, but i think (think) i might re-do the skin.