cheers for the sergestions on improve ments the space marine hes treading is ment to be already dead from weapons fire and he is taking revenge for his battle brothers death in a sadistic sort of way by using him as a footing , I have completey glued the model yet so I can still reposition the top hlaf to a more studier look , again thanks for the comments ,all are welcome to improve my skill
It's pretty cool i must say, but there are also some things that i would like to appoint. 1. It would look much better if he held the spacemarine in his fist, instead of standing on him. 2. It looks like he's trying to stomp on the spacemarine and the spacemarine looks like he isn't taking any serious damage... The armour is still ok! 3. Why would the dreadnought kill his own teammates?? 4. It looks more like he's slipping on the marine, like a banana or something. Well, here's the good critisism, 1. Your idea is good and if you would have spent some more time, fixing the minor bugs like how the dreadnought is standing. If you would have glued the top in a little more steady way, it would have looked really cool! Of course, this is only my thoughts and it's not that terrible as it may seems. I just want to help you a bit with the conversion, before you paint it. Because then it's too late. Anyway, i would say.. 7+ almost 8. Cheers! -Erik
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