looks really menacing ... maybe a few more details (like the eagle on the breast plate, rims of the shoulder pads ...) would make this one striking. you have skill as can be seen by the color choice, the clean paintjob and details (bolter mag). if i may suggest a color for the eagle, rims and maybe the skull on the bolter - brazen brass with a highlight of shining gold. imo that would look quite nice and not take too much of the dark theme. paintjob + mini + scheme = 7 points + 1 (taken it will be changed a little) :)